Comma Splices
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Bj’s Vevlet Freeze, is mostly known for its ice
cream and being a place to buy ice cream, but along with the many ice creams,
they also offer hamburgers, sandwiches, French fries, and drinks, with a wide
variety of food selections, this is an outstanding place to enjoy a delightful
meal, with a delicious dessert after.
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She is sleepy, she has to go to work.
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The dog is barking, it is hungry.
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Sally is running, her flats are not good shoes.
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The Tell-Tale Heart is a great book, Sarah loves
to read.
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The teacher is crazy, she probably drinks too
much coffee.
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The love of shoes, she likes hoodies.
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He is crazy, she is crazier.
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Bj’s Velvet Freeze, is an excellent place to
eat, everyone loves it.
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The light burnt out, the stove is off.
Run on sentences
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The squirrel ran up the log to chase a cat that
was running up and down the log.
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The cat chased the squirrel ran into the lake
they did.
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The squirrel could swim but the cat had
troubles.
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The Cat got out chasing the squirrel again up in
a tree.
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The squirrel got up the tree but the cat was
following him.
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They both fall out the tree and, fall to the
floor with a thump.
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Even though, they are both hurt, they run away
again.
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The cat happens to be a bit, faster than the
squirrel so, it catches up quickly.
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The squirrel trips and falls but, the cat comes
to its rescue.
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They then become friends and live, happily ever
after.
Lacey --
ReplyDeleteYou have comma spliced down, but the majority of your run-on sentences really aren't run-ons. For example, the first sentence is fine the way it is because there aren't two complete sentences -- just one independent clause and one dependent clause.
It would be good for you to do some additional review on this as well.
Thanks,
Nick